Adventures in Bad Copy Vol 1

​Today we are going to review an email from the survival and tactical niche. I get pretty passionate about this one, as you will see in the video.  

​My military mindset gets triggered almost immediately. 

​This one is a prime example of how not knowing your market will destroy your credibility.  

​Wait for 7:10 into the video if you want to see one of the worst things I've ever seen in an email (for ANY market). ​

​What the author could have done better

  1. ​Provide an additional welcome email explaining why I'm hearing from a new person or re-write the first email.
  2. Introduce me to the product he is selling. Make me excited about what is coming instead of making excuses.
  3. Never tell me I bought​ your inferior product then ask me to buy the new one...​​​​​
  4. Take some time researching the market even if you are a part of that market. The hours spend researching are never wasted.

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